Who do you admire most?

Peer response for: María F. Espinosa Gómez.

By: Beatriz Beltrán Sánchez.

Dear María,

I have read your text and I think it has got a very good presentation and I love that you have chosen your mother as the person you admire.

I find your topic sentence very well done and your supporting sentences are describing your mother very good with some adjectives and examples. I think the structure is also good and the conclusion shows very good the idea that you want to show.

So continue in that way, well done!

The person I admire most is my mother, she is a role model for me. I am sure that there is none as hard-working and determined as she is. The things I like the most about her are her strength, she is the strongest woman I have ever met; her capacity for solving problems, her sense of responsibility and her honesty. Everything I know I learned from her, for instance she taught me to fight for the things that I love and to never give up. She used to tell me that I could achieve anything if I put my mind to it, and thanks to this compliment I’m sure of myself. My mother has always been a great example for me because she is always cheerful and has got a smile on her face most of the time even though she has no reasons. Although we don’t always agree on everything, she respects my own decisions. Everybody says that we are like two peas in a pod and I think that they are quite right about that. In conclusion, I’m grateful for the mother I have got and for all the love that she gives me every day. I hope that someday I can be just like her.